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It is certain that the beach is more fun than the pool. I think the beach is the best because there are waves, sand, shells and fish.
Firstly, there are no waves in swimming pools. Waves are absolutely fantastic for swimming through, and on, as when you go body surfing. Moreover, you can use a boogie board or surfboard to ride the waves.
Secondly and surely you can enjoy the sand by using it and walking on it. There are many ways you can use the sand, make sandcastles and dig holes. Definitely, the sand dunes are perfect for riding and surfing down on a board. You could dig holes to make mini pools to play in.
Thirdly, there are lots of beautiful, shiny shells to collect. It is obvious that you can collect many different shells. They can be used to decorate sandcastles or you can decorate craft objects. You may